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- "Wonderful piece whose essence is captured in the lines "that life from the past, sleeps deeply." I can relate to this and, at times, when I look back at different periods of my life they seem like things someone else experienced. Ciao, Steve"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "i found forever in another location" by Magdalena
- "I think it works if you end it after "furthermore." Either that, or you need thirteen lines in that last part or it seems out of balance and what is there seems too in earnest to tie things up. I think you can just leave it hanging and it works fine. The only two lines that I don't think really worked were "To watch upcoming season,
of "pururin" cartoon." Other than that, I think all the lines are witty and filled with excellent imagery. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Untitled" by God Is In The Rain
- "Lovely! It is the thing that bonds us most, and elevates, motivates, and generates most,if not all of our emotions. Yet, sadly, we take this and other gifta, for granted!"
Posted by natalie on "Why the Ocean Waves" by Gideon Lost