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"What's the old adage, "Don't threaten me with a good time."? The metaphors you used were absolutely enthralling. This was very deep and slightly confusing to me maybe I'm just too stupid to understand. I couldn't tell if you were distant after separating from someone and leaving an impression in their will and their mind. Or if that person had came back to you, and you were never to let go. This leaves me with a beautiful, erie sense of self-love & wonder. Even if it's not reciprocated from the other, this piece inspires to love believe it or not. At least in my head. Outstanding piece!"
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Yes, I Am the Worst, pt. 2" by 10 Forty Three

"I like the simple classic rhyme approach. Elegant work my man, keep 'em coming!"
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "Conflux" by Renegade

"Intimacy like that comes easy for me. It's the building and keeping it at the same intensity that gets me in the end. I've always loved those first few moments, though, of utter gripping connection."
Posted by Lux on "Breathing You In" by Locke

"Oh I liked this. A piece that uses rhyme just right"
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Conflux" by Renegade

"Fear of the unknown, the mystery of magnificence so great, the thought of the merest detail being revealed is pure horror show. So much to chew on with this piece. Great stuff."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Omne ignotum pro magnifico " by TropicalSnowstorm

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