""Selfishly selfless gratification" - that is an excellent turn of a phrase! I know just what you mean with that, and can picture just the attitude. Ciao, T/S" Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Air" by Raven of Erin
"I think you just need to tighten up some of the language a bit, overall I think this is a promising piece. Keep it vague adds to the sense of mystery and hints at an untold story. Ciao, T/S" Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "changing of blades PART 1" by muhammad wasif baig
"Can't believe this one slipped past me! As usual, your words flow so well and paint wonderful imagery in my mind. Well done! Ciao, T/S" Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Cellophane Seraphim" by georgelstein
