Half a year away and still beautiful.

By Armor for your life

I’m not sure what to say.
It’s been far too long,
And you look too good.
Like something…

Something in a blue dress.

You’ve got me doing back flips,
the head over heels kind.
Which is a nice change of pace
Since I have not moved in six months.

Oh, and I forgot to mention,
You are this hearts inspiration
And your breathing lungs are its motivation.
The kind that grants me the strength
for one more dance.

So say you’re in the mood,
And that you can keep up.
Pick out your favorite song
and say your in love.

Because I feel like sweeping
you up and off your feet.

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© 2007 Armor for your life
Published on Saturday, June 23, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, April 4, 2009, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Inspiring, brilliant write :)

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    This is really beautiful and sweet. I love how it has an air of spontaneity, yet it's written with such precision of emotion.

  • Armor for your life On Wednesday, August 29, 2007, Armor for your life (9)By person wrote:

    lol thats funny because it was very random. I wrote it right after seeing her again after months of apart.

  • Revisable Retina On Saturday, June 23, 2007, Revisable Retina (81)By person wrote:

    This poem made my heart drop just like seeing a love from the past that has that kind of power over people. Your poetry always sings in my ears Armor.. Rach

  • Tania On Saturday, June 23, 2007, Tania (192)By person wrote:

    very beautiful.. loved the last two lines.

  • A former member wrote: "Pick out your favorite song/and say your in love" *sighs* it's like a lullaby that's never sung, spoken across airwaves in the whispers of a wish instead. Love it. ~*Beth*~

  • Mylissa On Saturday, June 23, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    "You are this hearts inspiration" my my my...pull at my heart strings...beautiful!!

  • elisa On Saturday, June 23, 2007, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    you sure know how to make love with words.... absolutely perfect.

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