The Methodology of Time
By Sepulcrawl
With the tick
Then the tock
Life draws slowly to its conclusion.
The life of a man, to pass
In misery from avarice.
The life of a planet,
Felled by design; into the
Interrogatives of extrapolation,
Sometimes not, but more often
Adrift in counting days
Until the grand collapse
Of solar heaves.
Gravitons diffuse
And sparse particles;
Now reaching inwards and
Counting their days till naught:
Downing fate.
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© 2007 Sepulcrawl
Published on Monday, March 19, 2007.
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On Tuesday, April 10, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
god, that really sucks.
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A former member wrote:
Thats deeply badass my friend!!! -_OttO_-
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
"Sometimes not, but more often Adrift in counting days." Has that "life is killing us vibe" that I love. Those first two lines were great for the imagery and sound. I saw Poe's clock in 'the black masque of the red death'. Write on.
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
you already know what i think of this...and i refuse to stroke your ego anymore...but i do love this piece..i would fav it if i had room ~kristy
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
make the room
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
i do so enjoy when you stop by for dinner
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
Cool shit man! I dig it. ~b
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
concise, maybe kurt -- but nonetheless welcome ;]
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
kurt=curt
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
very intense, I enjoyed this as I felt all your words with bliss.
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
thanks sweets. i did quite like your material, as well. you are a fair bit above most of your peers.
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Matty why must you always come across as a pompous egotistical ass in all your comments...gahhhh
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
that's just who i am, sweetie. love me for it
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
a constant gasp .....in the cosmic collapse..... ....a perpetual beginning ...in this never-ending forever... ....well said.
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On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
Always a pleasure, elisa ;] I shall have to clone you so i have someone to collaborate with