The Methodology of Time

By Sepulcrawl

With the tick
Then the tock
Life draws slowly to its conclusion.

The life of a man, to pass
In misery from avarice.

The life of a planet,
Felled by design; into the
Interrogatives of extrapolation,
Sometimes not, but more often
Adrift in counting days

Until the grand collapse
Of solar heaves.
Gravitons diffuse
And sparse particles;

Now reaching inwards and
Counting their days till naught:
Downing fate.

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© 2007 Sepulcrawl
Published on Monday, March 19, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sepulcrawl On Tuesday, April 10, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    god, that really sucks.

  • A former member wrote: Thats deeply badass my friend!!! -_OttO_-

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    "Sometimes not, but more often Adrift in counting days." Has that "life is killing us vibe" that I love. Those first two lines were great for the imagery and sound. I saw Poe's clock in 'the black masque of the red death'. Write on.

  • Sin On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    you already know what i think of this...and i refuse to stroke your ego anymore...but i do love this piece..i would fav it if i had room ~kristy

  • Sepulcrawl On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    make the room

  • Sepulcrawl On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    i do so enjoy when you stop by for dinner

  • blue On Monday, March 19, 2007, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    Cool shit man! I dig it. ~b

  • Sepulcrawl On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    concise, maybe kurt -- but nonetheless welcome ;]

  • Sepulcrawl On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    kurt=curt

  • Mylissa On Monday, March 19, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    very intense, I enjoyed this as I felt all your words with bliss.

  • Sepulcrawl On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    thanks sweets. i did quite like your material, as well. you are a fair bit above most of your peers.

  • Sin On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    Matty why must you always come across as a pompous egotistical ass in all your comments...gahhhh

  • Sepulcrawl On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    that's just who i am, sweetie. love me for it

  • elisa On Monday, March 19, 2007, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    a constant gasp .....in the cosmic collapse..... ....a perpetual beginning ...in this never-ending forever... ....well said.

  • Sepulcrawl On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    Always a pleasure, elisa ;] I shall have to clone you so i have someone to collaborate with

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