She makes me sick

By just breath

I met a new friend on the horizon
But friends no more
She makes me sick to the core
I wanted to attack her, but I chose to ignore

I attended her wedding
It was so beautiful and raw
But the vowles she spoke did not last
Because she is a whore

Her husband must also choose to ignore
Living in the desert, only four hours from the shore
after a few drinks, we piled in the door
full of giggles and laughs we drove the four
She had to sit in the middle between my man and me
claims to be car sick you see

Her dirty fingers chose to slide
They hovered on my boyfriends side
They couldn't go much further than this as we arrived at the beach
I wish he had told me this

It happen on the way back home
As we stopped half way he let me know what a dirty, dirty little hoe
I had to hold and not explode as we drove the rest of the way

I fantasise about beating the bride who's fingers chose to slide
But I have to remember to be the better, and hold on to my pride.

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© 2007 just breath
Published on Thursday, March 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Enigma On Monday, March 26, 2007, Enigma (91)By person wrote:

    That was great. you are good!

  • NapoleonsLust On Friday, March 16, 2007, NapoleonsLust (16)By person wrote:

    this is good. just tell the guy anyways well maybe after he becomes a journeyman hahaha NL

  • Mylissa On Friday, March 16, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    ugggh me too, like Mab.

  • just breath On Friday, March 16, 2007, just breath (39)By person wrote:

    Trust me I do want to, but her husband wouldn't believe it anyway and my poor man has to work under him as he is an apprentice!

  • A former member wrote: argh!this would make me want to break her fingers!

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