Time

By Rebel_Angel

Was I wrong to think you were different?
You never seem to have time for me,
Always have other things to do or places to be,
I thought you would always be there for me,
I thought you would save me,
Help me through the rough times,

Am I too hard on myself
Because of my past,
Think I'm going to lose you like the others,
Think your lying when you're really not,

My mind tells me your like the others,
The ones I also thought were different,
But maybe this time you are,
How am I to know?
I've misjudged so many times
Been hurt by too many people,
People who don't even care,
Maybe you are different,
Maybe you will save me,
I guess it just takes time,


You said you are here for me,
Maybe your not lying,
I guess I will have to wait and see,
Hopefully I have the time and patience.

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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Monday, April 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Thursday, January 22, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    It seems to me that this is something I have read before.. But maybe the reason is that I can relate and I think most can.. *tryes to make sense* lovely write.. M :O)

  • A former member wrote: I can really relate to this, infact I'm going through something like this at the moment. Great write :)

  • Abbyernathie On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    this one reminds me of certain guy troubles...i think u know what i mean...lol...sorry guys keep makin life hell for ya, if i could make it stop i would...

  • blackdarkness On Thursday, July 24, 2003, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    I can relate....great write

  • _Andrew_ On Friday, July 18, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    i can totally relate to this... it almost makes me cry... *~*aNDReW*~*

  • The_Scavenger On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger (30)By person wrote:

    love in waiting... I agree make sure this one is worth the wait. dont cry over it cause the no one in this world is worth crying over, and the one that is will never make you cry.

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, April 16, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    hope u have the yime too so many don't

  • Aurora_Light On Sunday, July 6, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    God i just noticed my misspelling time*! good i'm done now

  • A former member wrote: suspicion and uncertainty are almost worse than betrayal to me.... hope this one deserves your trust

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