It’s a little bit colder without you.
By Armor for your life
"Don't you think it's a pretty night to watch
Your own breath?"
And I open my mouth and blow into the frost
To let out all the ghosts.
On a cold night like this
I take in stars
Hoping their warmth will reach my heart.
And I can feel the chill down to my bones.
Now I'm as fragile as the glass
Your lungs are made of.
Every tear I've cried is frozen in place.
Letting everyone know
That I still miss you.
The wind blows
Past my cheeks turning them red
And I am mistaken for blushing.
As the warmth from my blood
Escapes through my pores,
I can't help believing in you.
Even on a night like this where
Hope can be lost with such ease.
I thought this kind of weather
Was supposed to be numbing.
So why can I still feel your absence?
I'm waiting for blood to flow to my fingers,
I'll be all right
When my hands get warm.
Comments on "It’s a little bit colder without you."
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On Tuesday, November 8, 2011, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
This has so much personality, you can feel the cold shiver throughout. I wish I had found this sooner.
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
I am totally in love with your writing. I'd love to know more about your situation.
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2007, Armor for your life
(9) wrote:
Wow it's a long story. Perhaps one day.
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Your writing is brilliant. I love it.
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
ditto star
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On Friday, January 19, 2007, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
This brought tears to my eyes. Literally. So simple, the sadness that plagues a soul. ..x
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A former member wrote:
this was very good. i'm going to have to read more of your posts. ~ red.
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A former member wrote:
"i can't help believing in you"...isn't that how it always is? this was really well written. you just mispelled where with were and i think u forgot "be" before numbing. =]
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A former member wrote:
Nice write, I love the second stanza. I can relate to this feeling. The heartache when someone you have loved leaves you behind is unbearable and nothing can make it leave you.
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, BeautifullyRuined
(94) wrote:
I really like the fourth and the last stanza.good write.