goodbye(6-27-06)lyric/poem

By beautifulfallenangel

i look for you
as my body sways
with death and blood

i can feel your presence
in all the silence
i tried to cry out
once before
to no avail

and my body begins
break apart
in the silence i'm breathing
bleeding in everyway

reaching for you
watching you leave
i can taste it now
feel it now

o---------
i look for you
as my body sway
with distance
i'm bleeding

i think i've gone
too far this time
i don't think
i'll last thru the night

screaming
for you
reaching
for you

o-------------

this is the end
i hear nothing
feel nothing
see nothing

my pen inks dry
and the paper
is blood ridden

so i guess my
goodbyes
will never be heard

o---------

i look for you
as my body sways
with distance
death and blood

along the walls
i write
goodbye

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© 2006 beautifulfallenangel
Published on Wednesday, December 6, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "my pen inks dry and the paper is blood ridden" amazing metaphorical use. This is truly brilliant. ][ ][

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