goodbye(6-27-06)lyric/poem
By beautifulfallenangel
i look for you
as my body sways
with death and blood
i can feel your presence
in all the silence
i tried to cry out
once before
to no avail
and my body begins
break apart
in the silence i'm breathing
bleeding in everyway
reaching for you
watching you leave
i can taste it now
feel it now
o---------
i look for you
as my body sway
with distance
i'm bleeding
i think i've gone
too far this time
i don't think
i'll last thru the night
screaming
for you
reaching
for you
o-------------
this is the end
i hear nothing
feel nothing
see nothing
my pen inks dry
and the paper
is blood ridden
so i guess my
goodbyes
will never be heard
o---------
i look for you
as my body sways
with distance
death and blood
along the walls
i write
goodbye
Comments on "goodbye(6-27-06)lyric/poem"
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A former member wrote:
"my pen inks dry
and the paper
is blood ridden"
amazing metaphorical use. This is truly brilliant. ][ ][