1 to 10 and Wishing for A hundred more...

By Rebel_not_Radical

...Ten fingers

...A hundred too short to count how
many things i have lost and loved

...A human flaw

[But i think it's redundancy]

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© 2006 Tetch de la Cruz
Published on Thursday, September 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • K_Love On Thursday, September 14, 2006, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    mm so true, so true. As much as we try we could never be flawless, sad to think about but very truthful.

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, September 14, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    This was a short but very inspiring piece, it held sadness and life in it~Gothic

  • Asouldivided On Thursday, September 14, 2006, Asouldivided (22)By person wrote:

    Different, anyway very good. Short, catchy and most odf all significant...

  • A former member wrote: tetchy, you're amazing. in so few words you can leave me stuttering..i'm in awe. thank you.

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, September 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    I like I like I like!! Very well done, and a very profound thought perfectly written out with sombre` words! Wicked cool dear. Julia~

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