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Dreamer's Horizon
By Eric
Breaking out of sky
Taking on the moon
Horizon behind
Stars above
Moving higher
Feeling free now
Amber waves
Far beneath me
Fading shores
Long forgotten
Greeting the edge
Feeling the wall of night
Im gone
Forever
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© 2006 Eric Scott Diaz
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A former member wrote:
fading shores long forgotten - captures an essence of sorrow, loss, and valued memories gone into the shadows...beautiful write *alone*
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On Friday, August 18, 2006, LordBrosnian
(44)
wrote:
Excellent piece, Like emma said. Very simple and very descriptive. SOmething I should try I tend to wrap my poems in riddles. That way everyone can taste it differently. anywho good write!
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On Thursday, August 17, 2006, Emma Lee
(8) wrote:
I found this to be very beautiful and sensual. Sometimes simple statements can sum everything up and that's what you did, good job.
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On Friday, August 18, 2006, The Zebra Warrior
(1521) wrote:
Very true..and a poem either holds sway or doesn't and here it works..beautifully succinct and dreamy, something to lose yourself in..I prefer this to 'fuck fuck' rants..nice one
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