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depth of flight
By girlafraid
scattered
but i've got a handful
of complete accomplishments
the genius lies
where the abstract meets the concrete
clenched fist meets the glass
and the everything that i've been holding together
hits the ground
running
"how does she do it?"
but the answer is in the secret
i'm just a butterfly trying to find a place
to land
comfort is a hurricane
flickering decisions
where choices
are only
the eye of the storm
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© 2006 girlafraid
Published on Tuesday, August 15, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, October 14, 2006, Grim_Sorrow
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wrote:
wow... uhh, not sure what to say. I'm truly impressed, such depth in simplicity, it strikes a chord. well done.
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On Wednesday, August 16, 2006, K_Love
(525) wrote:
"and the everything that I've been holding together hits the ground." A feeling I've been dealing with lately. This hit me, wonderful write.
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On Wednesday, August 16, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I like that first part, thats brilliant that is...makes me smile a secret smile and nod as if I know more than I ought to, or even more than I actually know...thanks :)
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A former member wrote:
"comfort is a hurricane"- great write. *alone*
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