view from the mountain of despair

By to love a psycho

the vast greatness
of nothing
terrifies me
potentials and wasted want
the crack of dawn
in the nights sky
whispers in the dark
spread the lie
as i curl up to hide
from the everything
that comes with life
from the nothing
that comes without

wont you take me to...

i need a place to...

view the night sky
and feel infinate
paint the world
as you ask why
the answers to the questions
are so hard to grasp
and the set timer goes so fast
an the man on the mountain top says


"STOP"

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© 2006 To love a psycho
Published on Wednesday, May 17, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Saturday, July 1, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    very relaxing poem.. the climax though, brought back a sense of lost emotion.. a very dramatic write.. and great rhyme scheme

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    Aww this was beautiful Jena I felt the emotions bleeding through my heart just broke at your feet and I wont' pick the pieces up no I won't. You need love and for that love to just sweep you off your feet, you beautiful goddess

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    Pain seems to just scream out from behind every word, dripping into the darkness plastered in our minds. This was amazing Jena, *hugs*

  • Dei On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    wow... this was awesome.

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