So Hard

By Chalin

courteous
break-up of
company makes

my third eye
jealous-it pulses
with desire to be

made love to;
licked with lust
and let's make nice

to everything i
cannot see but
touch for spite

a sense for a sense,
i'll take you anyday,
(twice on sunday)

you wrote those words
in fingerpaint on my
heart-worst of all

is the mantra you make
out of recanting-
and reinforce it with

predictable disappearances
because it is easy-so
easy. to run from me.

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© 2006 Chalin
Published on Monday, April 24, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • capt_funguy On Friday, April 13, 2007, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    this is like significance within a whirlpool of nothing ... like a lost universe touched by no gravity outside itself -- i'm trying to say ....

  • capt_funguy On Friday, April 13, 2007, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    that when you read it, it's all that matters .. oneness ... powerful this ... funguy

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Wonderful imagery! I especially like the notion of your third eye jealous and desiring to be "licked with lust". Great one! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: you make the best of each word.. this is something profound, snappy and sinful, it leave such an impression, brings forth instinctive human impulses/defenses.. deep formulation. Scholar

  • Sin On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    brilliantly displayed...im so happy to see youre posting again ~kristy

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