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can you find the rub?
By Anoblechicken
soft touches combined with hard thoughts
bend this perception to see what is real,
reality or fantasy
it doesn't matter here
look threw to the soul,
to the eyes which lie
but which make us whole
shhhhh can you hear the soft wisper
of the subconscience mind
trying to escape
not knowing what to find
expectations
blown away
such ugly desires
with such beautiful mistakes
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© 2006 Anoblechicken
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A former member wrote:
luv the title
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564)
wrote:
You did a good job, I loved every part of it...But my mind was not wanting it too end. But the ending was perfect
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was beautiful I loved the imagey
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