open eyes

By Anoblechicken

confusion
shoe horses and seagulls
nostalgia in the form of sight
hand takes hand, fingers are pointed
searching for a destination that can't be found ,
spit hitting blades
as they watch amused
confusion
nothing appears
remember,

questions of illusions
dance songs in our head
as memories push forward
inviting us to remember what
we have

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© 2006 Anoblechicken
Published on Wednesday, April 12, 2006.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was beautifully worded and sent a million tiny dancing thoughts into my head. I especially liked the ending line.. "memories push forward inviting us to remember what we have"

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