The Right One

By meltingpetal

*This was told to me by a good guy friend of mine who is in the army. We talk online and asked him when will I know that I have met the right one? He responded:


The one...

who calls you beautiful instead of hot
who call you back when you hang up on him
who will stay awake just to watch you sleep
wait for the guy who kissed your forehead
who wants to show you off to the world when you are in sweats
who holds your hand in front of his friends
wait for the one who is constantly reminding you of how much he cares about you
and how lucky he is to hav you
wait for the one who turns to his friends and says...
"she's the one"

Then you know you will have the right one.

I wanted to pass this on to girls who have had their heart broken and are looking for the same right guy out there that I am. Keep this in mind while your looking.

Hoping love finds you
meltingpetal

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© 2006 meltingpetal
Published on Sunday, February 26, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *sighs* Yes, this is so very true...and it's so very sad to me, because I have found the right one...and I've lost him. But maybe, someday, I'll be blessed with finding love again. *Evangel*

  • A former member wrote: I fucking wish..

  • manywalks On Sunday, February 26, 2006, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Yep, that sounds pretty much like the right one to me.

  • NikesRain On Monday, February 27, 2006, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    *nods* ah this has me all in smiles...

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