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giving up
By ABIGAIL
im cradled in a corner
of a dark empty room
slowly rotting away
praying the end will come soon
ive lost all my strength
left weak and unsure
unable to understand
yet, not wanting to know
hiding behind a shadow
wishing away my pain
slowly leaving me hollow
a face with no name,
a soul with no fate
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© 2006 ABIGAIL
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, mywristshurt
(408)
wrote:
i hope this is an unfinished piece, because it feels like there is something missing.. i liked it, but there needs to be more words put with it
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A former member wrote:
i can relly conect to that.i no x-actly how u feel
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On Sunday, March 5, 2006, DeviantxSeraph
(17) wrote:
Once again,very good write.You set your feeling out clearly and that's always good.
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A former member wrote:
see? this is pretty much why i have such a name. there's reasons an such but, u get the point. anyway, good write. keep em coming
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Faceless souls, aren't we all. What a fine addition to DP you're proving to be. ~ mw
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