Yeah Whatever.,,,,,
By etarnally damnd
I sat down in my chair tonight.
Ready to write this poem for all to see.
One that would describe all my rage and sorrow.
So breming with emotion that even a quick glance would draw people into
read it all.
One that people could relate to and conect with.
So i started writing this poem i wanted to write so badily thinking it
would magicly make me feel better some how.
and as i got threw the begining of it i realized......
.....its all pointless.
Wether or not i write some great poem so full of emotion so insperational
to others doesn't really matter.
Because i can't describe the way i feel all the anger and all the other
emotions i have locked up deep inside of me.
And i have already stated how people always try there damnedest to make
others suffer for something and always try to make sure they get what they
want. and its a bounse if it screws some on over at the same time.
And that the world is a cold dark place ready to slight ur throaght at
any moment with one little screw up.
So there really is no point in it as far as i can tell.
So if u would please tell me...
....some one tell me.....
What is the point????
Comments on "Yeah Whatever.,,,,,"
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
This sound's like complicating emotion's swirled around in confusion great write
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
yeah it is kinda complicating thanks for the coment.-grave
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I can't tell you the point. I know why I write, and In many ways it does make me feel better. Sometimes, I do think that writing poetry is a worthless talent, but then I read the works of others and I know... If we FEEL anything from a poem...
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
If we take anything from words of others and learn, or just know that people do feel the same way as we do... that's when it's worth it. To me at least. You gotta find your own. As for this piece, loved it. Know what you meant.
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
There are some spelling errors. +quite a few but you can touch that up, no prob.+ Otherwise, you had me hooked, dude. Write on.
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
hey thank you for ur coments. and yeah i do need to fix all the spelling errors but thanks again man.-grave