LOST HOPE
By ABIGAIL
TRUE LOVE DOES NOT EXIST
IT IS JUST A FANTASY
WHICH LEADS US TO BELIEVE
ENFATUATION IS UNIQUE
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2006 ABIGAIL
Comments on "LOST HOPE"
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On Thursday, July 20, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
hey abigail, im terribly sorry for what you have to go through.. but this was just really short for my taste.. i'll read a few more things though
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
welcome todp.. good write, less caps
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, ABIGAIL
(5) wrote:
thanks for the coments, and the constructive critisism as well
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, manywalks
(747) wrote:
My, my, so sweet, perfect example of fine minimalism. ~ mw
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A former member wrote:
If you made the syllable in line five five you've would have had a haiku.
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On Friday, February 24, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Short and true and straight to the point nice
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Very profound. I disagree, but that doesn't take away from the beauty of this poem. I would suggest not writing everything in CAPs. That get's... I don't know... annoying, i guess. Welcome to DP.
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On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Mercy-me. You look like trouble, baby-girl. WELCOME to dp :)