LOST HOPE

By ABIGAIL

TRUE LOVE DOES NOT EXIST
IT IS JUST A FANTASY
WHICH LEADS US TO BELIEVE
ENFATUATION IS UNIQUE

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© 2006 ABIGAIL
Published on Thursday, February 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Thursday, July 20, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    hey abigail, im terribly sorry for what you have to go through.. but this was just really short for my taste.. i'll read a few more things though

  • Guillotine On Saturday, February 25, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    welcome todp.. good write, less caps

  • ABIGAIL On Saturday, February 25, 2006, ABIGAIL (5)By person wrote:

    thanks for the coments, and the constructive critisism as well

  • manywalks On Saturday, February 25, 2006, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    My, my, so sweet, perfect example of fine minimalism. ~ mw

  • A former member wrote: If you made the syllable in line five five you've would have had a haiku.

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, February 24, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    Short and true and straight to the point nice

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Very profound. I disagree, but that doesn't take away from the beauty of this poem. I would suggest not writing everything in CAPs. That get's... I don't know... annoying, i guess. Welcome to DP.

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, February 23, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Mercy-me. You look like trouble, baby-girl. WELCOME to dp :)

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