What’s wrong with Polly?

By knowhereman

Too many loves
Too little concern
To young to be involved

When I hurt her
I hurt my self more

If only I could have been
Every little thing she needed

Too many other lovers
Too many other concerns
To old to be involved

None of them know
None of them see

I would give what I can’t
To be every thing she need’s

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© 2006 knowhereman
Published on Tuesday, February 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Phalanx On Thursday, November 12, 2009, Phalanx (628)By person wrote:

    Somtimes no matter how you try to hold something, you can't help but break it. It's one of the most defeating sensations. Somethings are to beautiful to touch and others just best left alone. Solid, man.

  • A former member wrote: yeah I get that with my re-writes...... my poem shadows went through over 20 differnt carnations till I found the one I like....... great write

  • knowhereman On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, knowhereman (40)By person wrote:

    Thanks

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