What inspires me to write?
By knowhereman
Is it her lines that vanish at the end of the photograph, that only captures
part of her and only for a moment as if she is a wild beast that cannot
be caged by color and paper?
Is it her eye’s that tell a story so sad and happy, that I am more than
willing to hear her words and let them carry me into feeling that I have
not had for some time?
Is it her age, that is closer to my children that my own, and yet at time’s
she is wiser than I, with all my years of life lived?
What is it that this dark flower stirs in me, that I find brightens my
life so much? When yet, she is not as dark as she appears to be?
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© 2006 knowhereman
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A former member wrote:
The questioning theme of this poem works very well I like the way it hits out at the reader. Very nice work here
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, ArcticWolf999
(53) wrote:
Such words of overwelming love and despair. You have my best regards.
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2011, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
Thanks so much, some times I forget I wrote this.
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2011, kinkifrog
(2691) wrote:
Thanks to ArcticWolf for discovering this gem...and thank you knowhereman ...just change the genders and it fits like a glove...
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2011, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
always welcome..
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, LovesInjecedVirus
(8) wrote:
that is so inspiring. but also sad. amazing write. keep it up.
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On Saturday, March 4, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
Thanks..
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A former member wrote:
Oh, goodness.. this is so very elegant, in its quiet way.. I saw it almost like a message in a bottle, bobbing stubbornly over indignant waves.. I feel as though I've been hushed. Welcome to DarkPoetry. This is amazing, thank you.
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On Thursday, February 9, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
Thanks
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L. I could spend all day complementing the eloquence, the sheer JOYOUS light of this poem. But let me sum it all up with a heart-felt...*sigh* Just gorgous, man.
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
My only criticism: I believe you ment *with all my years of LIFE lived* and not *live* I may be mistaken.
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On Thursday, February 9, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
You are correct, that’s exactly what I wanted to say (I fixed it now), and all I can say is I try..
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A former member wrote:
love and the hurt of love is what inspires me.... I know what you were feeling here man and I love that feeling.....great write
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On Thursday, February 9, 2006, knowhereman
(40) wrote:
its such a great feeling, now to harness it some more? BTW Thanks