Trying to Stay Alive

By PoeticHellion

Those half a dozen drunken nights,
Sitting with your bottle,
Never giving up the fight.

Drinking yourself to new heights,
Finger on the throttle, in
Those half a dozen drunken nights.

Holding on with all of your might,
Tears streaming with no one to coddle,
Never giving up the fight.

Turn out the lights,
Throw back a lot’ll,
Those half a dozen drunken nights.

Holding on so tight,
Trying hard not to spill—don’t want to mottle,
Never giving up the fight.

So in your pious plight,
Don’t gve in to your near-empty bottle,
Those half a dozen drunken nights,
Never giving up the fight.

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© 2006 PoeticHellion
Published on Saturday, January 7, 2006.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love it. It give the reader something they can relate to... Well at least thats the way I feel..

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, January 17, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    That's very good. I like the rhymes and flow.

  • Thorn On Tuesday, January 10, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Very well crafted, I must say. ♥

  • A former member wrote: this poem transitions very nicely....but for me its seems like it is more than half a dozen nights..but thats just me

  • Thorn On Tuesday, January 10, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Trust me, it was many more than half a dozen.

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