No More

By PoeticHellion

I can't make a promise
(promises, promises)
I can't make a lie
(green with envy,
no.)
I'm not going to tell you that...
Forever.
Is you and me.
BUT.
I'm not going to hurt you again.
Because you aren't who should be hurt.
You don't deserve it.
And maybe she's right,
Maybe I am the bitch.
Maybe I am the one who should be alone.
But I guess that's what love is about,
Right?
Forgiving.
Forgetting?
I don't think we can ever truely...
Forget the pain.
BUT.
We're going to make it through,
And we're going to see this work out.
Because who else was there for me,
When my mom left,
And came back a week later?
Who else was there when I just needed to cry...
Because there was nothing I could do
But cry?
Nobody,
But you.
Because you are the only one.
THE ONLY ONE.
Who completes me.
Who will EVER complete me.
Like that.
Or that will hold me like you did.
Like you do.
Because there is no one.
At all.
Like you.

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© 2005 PoeticHellion
Published on Friday, December 16, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    you really wanted to make that last, didnt you?

  • Nail Bunny On Friday, January 6, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    Yay!! It's wonderful!!

  • Sticky Kitty On Thursday, December 22, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    sweetness. What an honest, heart tugging piece. -kitty

  • Thorn On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Likewise... you hold too great a piece of my heart, and with out it... without YOU, I will never be complete...

  • A Burning God On Saturday, December 17, 2005, A Burning God (46)By person wrote:

    that's the fun of being a person, we're all unique, fulfilling a specific person's needs and desires. Good write

  • Forgotten Angel On Friday, December 16, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    im sorry..i didnt mean to call you a bitch..i was ticked off..and i hope you guys..well..are happy together..and im glad you guys r working things out..and thats really all i have to say...-Kel

  • A former member wrote: I think you're wrong. Love isn't ABOUT forgiving and forgetting.. perhaps, it's part of it ..but I think forgiveness is taken advantage of..presumed, which allows for one person to do what the want.. and the other to nod and say it's really okay..

  • A former member wrote: ..but I think that it's not. You're supposed to treat the person you love, do them the same respects they do you.. also, I do not believe that in love, you find completion.. two whole people love.. halves don't just walk around waiting to be whole.

  • A former member wrote: That's never made sense to me. It takes a whole person to give all that is required to love and to be able to put everything into that relationship.. perhaps that is why the halves seem to mess things up?

  • A former member wrote: In my opinion, it's about complimenting one another as seperate individuals.. and how you seem to bring out the best in one another.. as each self. But, yeah. All that said.. Those are just my thoughts.. mind-provoking write.

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