Pictures
By tormentedsoul666
I'll draw you a picture,
Picture with a twist.
I'll draw it with a blade,
I'll draw it on my wrist.
And as I draw my picture,
My memories will drain.
No more sorrows now,
All I feel is pain.
As the pain fades,
My mind begins to clear.
Laugh quietly to myself,
I gave into my fear.
I gave into temptation,
Needed to feel the bliss.
Now all I had is gone,
All I have is this.
No feeling in me now,
Lay on the floor and cry.
The blood soaks through my clothes,
Now hoping just to die.
Tears mix with blood,
Silently I scream.
Never want to wake,
Want to stay inside my dream.
Cry out in my sleep,
Tears streaming down my face.
I need your love right now,
Need you to take me from this place.
I need to hear your voice,
Telling me that I'm alright.
I need you here with me,
Need you to help me fight.
Without you I'm lost,
No reason left to live.
Gave everything I owned,
There's nothing left to give.
Hoping above all else,
To feel your touch once more.
Look quietly at my reflection,
As the tears just start to pour.
A black rose shows my heart,
The red one shows my pain.
The white one shows my hope,
And you are what I gain.
Eyes look toward our future,
Heart that soars above.
For the first time in my life,
I know for sure that this is love...
Awards
Comments on "Pictures"
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A former member wrote:
This gave me chills down my spine... Reminds me of how I used to feel sometimes. Excellent work!
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A former member wrote:
this is BEAUTIFUL! i love it
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A former member wrote:
Nice work. Very emotive and technically sound too.
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On Thursday, July 5, 2012, SummerCoat
(29) wrote:
i love this. it reminds me of me back when i was that way. it also relates to whats been going on in my life presently. but i don't injure anymore but have played out the scene 1,000 times in moments of despair.my lover is in prison for 7 years, 3 1/2 still to serve :( ive wanted to cut so many times since he has been gone. VERY VERY GOOD
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A former member wrote:
So much pain, so much love, perfect, I really enjoyed it, thank you.
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A former member wrote:
as i read your poem i could see what your was talking about. you r good.
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A former member wrote:
Loved it, got a very vivid image of one scarred in an effort to find love. Good luck to you in your future.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful...shere talent and much love. Keep writing, sweetie, this was nice and you´ve found the one. Love!
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On Monday, April 16, 2007, Saint_Reaper
(200) wrote:
well well... what do we have here? let me tell you, this is sheer talent... love it... you never seize to amaze me withy uor writing abilities....
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On Thursday, January 19, 2006, ZealousValadiction
(42) wrote:
i have read this twice now and i have not been able to get the images out of my head this is simply hypnotic i like
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A former member wrote:
This was so painful yet beautiful I cant even atemp to leave a comment deserving enough...Tainted....
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On Saturday, December 3, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
oh wow, thank you so much it just kinda came when i was thinking about...everything, thank you for the comment