End of pain?

By leluna

Slice, Slice
End of pain
Maybe pills? Wouldn't cause enough pain to take it away.
Slice, Skice
Previous cutters understand- cutting is the only thing that brings relief, and brings an odd sense of euphoria.
Slice, Slice
So decided. How many will care?
They'll be better off anyway- even if that is a cliche.
Slice, Slice, Slice

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© 2005 leluna
Published on Wednesday, November 23, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • steuss On Wednesday, September 19, 2007, steuss (92)By person wrote:

    you have good repetition here. it makes a difference being able to choose your pain

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Saturday, January 14, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    slice and pull the pain away as the blood drips freely

  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, November 23, 2005, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    there is only pain that is misunderstood here.........we all know it and feel differently.......that is one of the reasons we are on this site..........urban

  • Forgotten Angel On Wednesday, November 23, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    i like this poem...cuz i am a cutter..am..was..not sure yet...but yea...i can relate 2 this..n i thought i was the only 1 who thought it brought relief..but..really good write! -Kel

  • sIo On Wednesday, November 23, 2005, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    try pills....they bring pain....trust me. cutters are just stupid.

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