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Broken Wings
By StAinedNblood
Her breath in the air, is still
Suffocated by words that are so lost
He left her alone
She feels she can't go on
Without him
As the tears shut her eyes
From all those times that she's cried
The memories just close her within
The pictures of him
Make her cut the pain away
Each slit for everytime
She told him "I love you"
Now there's blood caked and dryed
Along the cracks and lines of her scars
So ashamed of herself
She has to hide them
All she can do is sit and wait
For him to take her back
And whisper "I love you" one more time
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© 2005 StAinedNblood
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A former member wrote:
Grave emotion expressed. He'll never read this poem so he will never know.i hope you learned to let go.
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A former member wrote:
That's exactly what happened with me, and bought me into the poetic world... It's something that I desperately want to be true
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A former member wrote:
To be alone.. Bitter emptiness.. Sad dream.. Written to create a beautiful poem.. Amazing where beauty can be found.
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A former member wrote:
I would like to bookmark this and add you as one of my favorite poets, but the site is currently not allowing me to do so... So, instead I will just let you know that is what I wish to do :)...
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A former member wrote:
This made me cry a little, I have to admit, because it so truly speaks of where I have been recently (emotionally, physically, mentally)... This is truly amazing and it is something that I have recently done/gone through... Thank you, and fantastic work...
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On Monday, November 14, 2005, Grey Lies
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wonderfully done...
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A former member wrote:
good write, I like the way it was written... i comend you
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