She didnt have to die

By Beautiful Scars

Crying in the end
Taking in the pain
Ill never see the end of this
Its driving me insane

You make yourself the victim
when you need nothing at all
you bring yourself up again
so all can see you fall

you where in love
It was wrong, and you still couldnt see
It took your life,
and you never believed..

All of this I said to you
I only said it once
Maybe if I'd warned you more
You never would have jumped...



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© 2005 DarkFairy
Published on Friday, October 21, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • beautifulfallenangel On Tuesday, December 12, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (62)By person wrote:

    ' you make yourself the victim' strikes home........reminds me of my mother..........but i love this

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, January 9, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    and maybe if you tied the person down, that could have worked too, things happen, even though we try to prevent or save someone, theystill happen, it doesn't ever mean we should give up

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