October

By Crysa

Last night I dreamt of flying,
away into the night.
Deafening screams,
drowned out by silent stars.

I flew.
Leaving everything behind.
The vast October sky
cleared my cluttered mind.

Cooling my burning flesh,
the crip night air,
shared forgotten secrets,
whispers in my ear.

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Crysa
Published on Monday, October 17, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: yay im a libra to..this was a great write

  • ApathysKiss On Wednesday, October 19, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    all my friends are libran, they are quite something for a gemini =). this was beautifully mystical. ~michelle

  • Philla On Tuesday, October 18, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    Librans rock! -*Philla*-

  • Err0r On Wednesday, October 19, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    Aha. I think 'we' the Librans should take over, because clearly we're the best. XDDD *awaits to be smacked by some leo or scorpio* :D

  • Sin On Wednesday, October 19, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    i second that notion..let the libra revolution begin lol ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: ..perception/clarity wrung on whimsical thought..a phantom grip..lovely work, really.

  • elisa On Monday, October 17, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    truly beautiful..........and i'm a libra:)

  • Philla On Monday, October 17, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    I agree with Err0r. You really did just bottle up my favorite month in so few words and set it free. I love it. I really really do =) -*Philla*-

  • Err0r On Monday, October 17, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    I feel as if you captured October in it's true aspect here. This was a short, but to the point write that was very well put together. :D I love it.

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