Nightmare

By Irioth

Bored of what I was doing, I went on a walk.
I passed a place lonely even in the day.
I kept walking, though, thinking that I wasn’t scared.
But in my mind, I was remembering
a nameless, faceless fear.
She has a face, though, and probably a name.
She haunts dreams that seemed so real, and for all I knew they were.
I was brought back to a smaller version of myself,
(dreaming that I was?) at the top of the stairs,
hiding, terrified, from my
nightmare,
real,
false,
ghostly,
androgynous-yet-female,
nameless, faceless, fear.

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Copyright 2005 Irioth
Published on Monday, October 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Thorn On Friday, October 21, 2005, Thorn (282)By person wrote:

    Ah, and for you, the fear may be a dream; I know my fear to be more real than I wish she were. An exceptional write, to say the least.

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    That was... unexpected... different... interesting and intreaguing... well done, all in all.

  • mysticventures On Monday, October 10, 2005, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    a different style write - and that is a good thing :)

  • A former member wrote: I like certain parts of it... it didn't really DRAW me to it(no offence) but i do like the detail... and for this poem, it was really good

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