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The Bubble
By Sigh on Sunday
Friends come and go
I live, I die
Alone in my thoughts
Asking myself why
To fight in seclusion
Good intentions by my side
Fighting without cause
Those good intentions die
Jump into the now
Forget what was then
Hate to burst your bubble
But things come to an end
Friends come and go
You live, they lie
Friends come and go
They live, I die
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On Monday, February 6, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200)
wrote:
This one feels... I'm not sure. Not incomplete. I can't shake the feeling that I missed something. oh well. that's prolly just me. Intrigueing. keep going.
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, AHHH
(187) wrote:
everything ends. great write. NOW SEND IN A POSTCARD AND RENEW YOUR ACCOUNT! CHOP CHOP!
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, Crysa
(33) wrote:
I think the last four lines really pulled this piece together. :)
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A former member wrote:
bubble.
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On Friday, October 7, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
solid piece , no flowers , no laughs ... nice work ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
thats exactly how it works, this poem has relief for me and, apparently, just opened my eyes
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, Griffin
(114) wrote:
you articulated your thoughts somewhat clearly. although I dind't like it I think that besides creating proper pausing points and studying classic poets to be influnced, I can't say anything bad about it.
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On Friday, October 7, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
and be selective in who you allow yourself to be "influnced" by ... just a tip ... funguy
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On Friday, October 7, 2005, Griffin
(114) wrote:
well influnce by what you like, but make sure they knew what they were doing
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On Saturday, October 8, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
yeah ... i had a feeling that wasn't a typo ... it would seem as though your thinking cap needs a new battery , when you're reenergized , read that response of yours again , i'm sure you'll get as much of a laugh out of it as i did ...lol... funguy
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Well said. Well put. I like it.
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
yep - no doubt, nicely done
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