Time
By Crysa
I had something to go where the {} is down below, but I forgot what it
was before I was able to write it down, now, I'm drawing a blank, I can't
seem to think of anything that would fit. So, questions, comments, thoughts,
and suggestions are welcome and appreciated. :)
.........
Time, your passing quickly
yet you've evaded me,
these wounds of mine
aren't healing, properly
My heart is asunder.
Though I am moving on,
these fears of mine,
keep holding me under.
My soul is still aching,
My heart keeps on breaking,
and, you're taking,
all that you can of me.
Time your useless to me...
Time, your sands are muddied,
dampened by my tears.
These wounds of mine,
are still sore and bloodied.
{}
My soul is still aching,
My heart keeps on breaking,
and, your taking,
all that you can of me.
Time your useless to me...
(Time your useless...)
You havn't healed, the wounds inside,
you can't take back, the tears I've cried
You havn't healed, the wounds inside,
you can't take back, the tears I've cried,
you won't turn back, your hands for me,
yes I'm begining to see, Time your useless to me...
Comments on "Time"
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A former member wrote:
I really like this! It's amazing and clever!
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A former member wrote:
TIME IS A GREAT TOPIC THAT YOU DESCRIBED PERFECTLY.
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On Saturday, October 1, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
THAT MISSING LINE IS A BIT OF A TEASE. (CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU PUT THERE) BUT THE REST IS GREAT.
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On Saturday, October 1, 2005, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
"time , you've stolen my words" ... seems like a nice fit ... nice write besides ... funguy
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On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Err0r
(358) wrote:
erm Nice write...sorry about the whole missing line thing. Thats gotta be a damper on ya. :D Good luck finding a filler.