Raven

By StAinedNblood

She walks towards his grave
And with each step, she breaks
With knives through her heart
The pain is forever

Just look at her eyes
So dark as mascara runs down her pale cheeks
Her arms soaked, dripping with blood
The tears just escape as she falls to pieces
Alone on his grave, she calls out his name
Just watches as the mud covers every crack in the black lace
He never comes, but yet she waits
She sits in tears, just waits to die
So she could lay her grave by his side

Years go by, til someone finds her
Her beautiful body now pale and lifeless
Now she lies right by his side
Just where she belongs
Now as I look back at the two graves
I noticed a rose, right where she laid
So black, so beautiful, just like his Raven

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Copyright 2005 StAinedNblood
Published on Thursday, September 22, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • xSightxSetxHighx On Wednesday, October 19, 2005, xSightxSetxHighx (11)By person wrote:

    This is pretty good. I think that the new one you wrote(the one you posted on xanga) is REALLY good, and that you should pst it here.. as a song. But this one is pretty good. - Maddie

  • A former member wrote: Hey Pretty Good stuff, reminds of Dylan's " Romance in Durango" has that edge of remorseful empathy to it.

  • Cutting_for_Freedom On Thursday, September 22, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom (34)By person wrote:

    Amazing and lovely.. Great write.

  • AngelicDemonMelisandre On Thursday, September 22, 2005, AngelicDemonMelisandre (26)By person wrote:

    Damn. And damn...that is one freakingly good poem. I love it. Amazing.

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