window

By girlafraid

lip lick
wrist flick
slick drip
sheet grip

tongue slide
lip glide
open eyes
shiver thighs

shadeless window
shameless shadow

hot mouth
wetter wet
sticky faced
pillow press
scratch pull bleed flesh

touch lust
slip thrust
bite suck
lovefuck

faster fast
need ask
slap crash
scream thrash

sing plea
make me free
make me free
make me free






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Copyright 2005 girlafraid
Published on Tuesday, September 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: mmm tantalizing...porn in words,,,erotica

  • A former member wrote: Felt like Dr Seuss went Goth....great flow for sure, liked the way it connected together ..... i cld even see it lyricly (prob like an eminem kinda style..) Kudos!

  • A former member wrote: Great flow. Loved it!

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Monday, August 6, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    So sexy, I love this.

  • Niemand On Friday, February 8, 2008, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Fucking awesome. -Geisha

  • capt_funguy On Monday, October 10, 2005, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    i am simply , the luckiest man alive .... funguy

  • A former member wrote: I agree with Urban: yummmm... **dusty**

  • A former member wrote: Good lord. Intense. "That looks like it tastes delicious" Awsome write. ~Ship!

  • Philla On Thursday, September 22, 2005, Philla (95)By person wrote:

    Dude that was beyond all awesome! How come you don't have more comments on this?! It's a crime to let a piece like this go unnoticed! God, but this has a beautiful flow. You had me hanging on every word. -*Philla*-

  • A former member wrote: ..riveting..god, this was fucking dynamite.

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