Deserted Eyes

By thinevoicetragic

As I walked down that dark path.
It seemed as if I lost my way back.
I followed that light. That shined through
The dark night. Some how I watched My soul rise.
I looked through My deserted eyes.
But I could not see the light Was Too bright.
Voices calling But I'm not responding.
Witch Way To go?
Follow The light or go back through the dark tunnel?
A hard decision to make.
Hopefully its all a dream and I'll soon awake.




Ps. Don't Buy Gas On the 10th. Boycott of the century

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Copyright 2005 thinevoicetragic
Published on Sunday, September 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • capt_funguy On Friday, June 23, 2006, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    hmmm ... oddly ... this being your last post ... gives it so much more strength , meaning , and possibility. - like you didn't wake ... cool piece as it was .. but time adds strangely to this . love it ... funguy

  • capt_funguy On Saturday, May 5, 2007, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    and still does.

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