Wilted

By AnarKoRn

Tears are dripping on her pale face
Her life is waste
Salty showers
Wilting flowers

Blood is flowing across her skin
Her hair is thin
Crimson teardrops
As her heart stops

Rain is falling on her white form
Her body is warm
Soil spilling
Hole is filling

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Copyright 2005 AnarKoRn
Published on Friday, September 2, 2005.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Saturday, March 24, 2018, Just Dave (457)By person wrote:

    If ever sleeping at your home it will be with one eye open. JD

  • A former member wrote: chills.

  • Liz On Friday, September 2, 2005, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    I like this better than "Miriam," because here I don't feel there is a beat missing, or a word wasted.

  • Liz On Friday, September 2, 2005, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    Again, clutch ending.

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