Crashing Down

By Eric

When a life goes wrong

Like a supernova at the end of its life

Its grown for so long, and has been through so much
When it all comes crashing down it's a terrible sight

Self imploding
Great event
Pulling in the lives that revolve around it

When a world suddenly comes crashing down on itself
I advise you to depart
For the life will drag you with it
To the pits of hell
No return

This is what happens

When a life goes wrong

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Copyright 2005 Eric Scott Diaz
Published on Saturday, August 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • just breath On Saturday, March 31, 2007, just breath (39)By person wrote:

    Yes this is true, I agree to move as far away as possible for they will try and drag you down too, great poem

  • A former member wrote: i loved this...i can only but echo everyone else..sorry :p

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, August 27, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    what a great write... i echo Melv's sentiments

  • ApathysKiss On Saturday, August 27, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    what melvin said...spectacular analogy. ~m~

  • A former member wrote: good question, fiting analogy

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