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Crashing Down
By Eric
When a life goes wrong
Like a supernova at the end of its life
Its grown for so long, and has been through so much
When it all comes crashing down it's a terrible sight
Self imploding
Great event
Pulling in the lives that revolve around it
When a world suddenly comes crashing down on itself
I advise you to depart
For the life will drag you with it
To the pits of hell
No return
This is what happens
When a life goes wrong
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Copyright 2005 Eric Scott Diaz
Published on Saturday, August 27, 2005.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Crashing Down"
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On Saturday, March 31, 2007, just breath
(39)
wrote:
Yes this is true, I agree to move as far away as possible for they will try and drag you down too, great poem
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A former member wrote:
i loved this...i can only but echo everyone else..sorry :p
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
what a great write... i echo Melv's sentiments
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
what melvin said...spectacular analogy. ~m~
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A former member wrote:
good question, fiting analogy
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