delusion of time

By Just a Rose

Every time you’re near
We try to pause time
Make these moments last
Into eternity

Sadly that is a power I do not posses
Impossible

Our hearts play tricks
Gives us illusions…
Time is lost completely

Only to be torn out of this dream
To reality
Biting reality

With you sleep is a waste of life,
For you are my dreams

Without you
Unconsciousness consumes
Searching for visions of you

I hate this feeling
Consuming every crevice of my being
Eating away at my very soul

It’s the feeling
Of every kiss goodbye
Made at the end of our delusion of time

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Copyright 2005 Just a Rose
Published on Wednesday, August 24, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • glasshouse On Friday, September 2, 2005, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    I love this! The end was perfect. I'm gonna read some more of your stuff, if its anything like this, consider yourself admired. -Glass

  • A former member wrote: you're right. minutes are precious.. i wish i could never have to feel like this again. but i know i cant. love sucks. but im happy that you're happy that you're in love because i hate love.. obviously. haha. you know what i mean.

  • abattoir On Wednesday, August 24, 2005, abattoir (115)By person wrote:

    sweet realities...unkind only to those who ever cared. lovely write

  • ApathysKiss On Wednesday, August 24, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    some lovely lines 'Without you Unconsciousness consumes Searching for visions of you' wonderful.

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