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Dawn's Finale: One mans ending, anothers beginning
By Eric
Beginning Question:
In a rush to comprehend
This journey that im in
I tend to recognize
The cold hard truth
That I know not where to begin
Final Journey:
This road that I wander
The dark road of shadows in red
I turn to look over yander
At the dusk's fading light
The wind blown thru the willows
The bird's farewell chirp
For evening is upon us
and to rest lay the earth
Thru these final hours
I wander in deep thought
Upwards I begin to look
As the stars shine brightly so
Last Words To A Young Man:
To sleep I must now go
But before I depart
I leave a final word to thee
Never forget
Keep moving
Always moving onwards
Till the very day you fall
To the very place you crawl
To Sleep; Eternal's home...
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Copyright 2005 Eric Scott Diaz
Published on Tuesday, August 16, 2005.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Dawn's Finale: One mans ending, anothers beginning"
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A former member wrote:
Many take some moments for granted, but this shows why we should cherish every single one of them, loved the piece
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A former member wrote:
I think blue put it much better than I could. The title gave this perfect meaning. Awsome. ~Ship!
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2005, ONEANDLONELY
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wrote:
The Beginning Question reminds me of the first day of school. Hundreds of faces with no identity. Eventually...Tho... We give all of them one.
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
yup, you've connected the dots well.. it does seem our need to have a reason why, but before long we realize it is found in 'not knowing', or rather 'experiencing' life. The moments we take for granted.. it is all there, in every moment.
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
But we forget to see.. or more nearer the point we see too much, all at once.. we tend to forget the beauty of just merely being, ourselves, as we truly are without influence. My applause to you.. ~b
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
wow.. you've amazed me again.... 'thru these final hours i wander in deep thought upwards i begin to look as the stars shine brightly so,upon my weary shoulders lay' god your amazing...really...this poem took my breath away...great work again! -Kel
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