Thank You

By vaultgrl

Something beautiful...
irritatingly so.
Someone wonderdul...
hauntingly so.

Making me smile...
a hapiness untold.
Making you smile...
a relationship to unfold.

Your beautiful countenance,
disregard any worry.
Your wonderful countenance,
moves aside any pain.

Your arms around me...
feeling so close.
Your voice surounds me...
like the smell of a rose.

Comfortably sinking,
fears melting away.
Comfortably sinking,
as your sent drifts my way.

Don't want it to end,
hold me tight.
Don't want it to end,
afraid that it might.

I feel so safe,
a feeling so new.
I feel so safe,
a feeling only from you.

I think this is me saying thank you.
But forgive me if Inever gives this to you.

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Copyright 2005 vaultgrl
Published on Sunday, August 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Pitch Black Heart On Sunday, January 22, 2006, Pitch Black Heart (12)By person wrote:

    hmm...someone is very special to have something written for them like that...even if they never receive it

  • Err0r On Friday, September 30, 2005, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    I have to agree here...man I'd love a thank you like that. :D Nice write.

  • elisa On Sunday, August 7, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    now that's a Thank You:)

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