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I Want
By peril_notion
I want to feel your eyes upon me
Witnessing my every move
I want to strip you down to nothing
Know we have naught to prove
I want to endure your tactual sensation
Experience your kisses upon my skin
I want to have you deep inside
Living no emotions of chagrin
I want to smell your flesh upon me
Tantalizing my senses with your aroma
I want to be within your arms
Slipping slowly into a quietus coma
I want to wake to your flawless face
Which will forever paint a smile on mine
I want to stay like this forever
In ecstacy our bodies entwined
Do these things with honor please
Don't treat me like your dirty whore
From this moment I submit to you
I offer you everything, plus ten times more
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Copyright 2005 Heather K. Burnett
Comments on "I Want"
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On Tuesday, August 23, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377)
wrote:
well said, heather...we give up so much for many boys to treat us as mere females...lovely work ~michelle~
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A former member wrote:
beautiful, i love this, so beautiful,
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On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
::low whistle:: Impressive. Love this piece. It...sang to me in a sense
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A former member wrote:
I love you, Heather. You deserve all of this and a lifetime more. Young men are for the majority at a loss when it comes to how to treat a woman, considering their role models and fatherly figures throughout life, setting bad examples not to live by.
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On Monday, July 25, 2005, redtearswhitesnow
(79) wrote:
Such an erotic piece.
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