Apocryphal Reality

By Eladrim

Teetering on the edge of crimson wings as they freeze,

Falling fast like fire.

The image of picturesque illusion.

The sound of credible deception.

The voice so shakingly confident.

The eyes so blindingly dark.

The laugh so convincingly fake.

A tear so unbelievably real.

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Copyright 2005 Eladrim
Published on Saturday, June 25, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • monalisamarie On Sunday, March 5, 2006, monalisamarie (113)By person wrote:

    Oh, I love the way you finished it...

  • A former member wrote: Love your work, really good poems you have..

  • Simply Me On Saturday, June 25, 2005, Simply Me (40)By person wrote:

    This is nice...loved the last line especially.

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