Ode to a Brick Wall
By finaldestiny
So symmetrically placed.
The cement bricks
climb up the wall.
Entwining each other.
Never to find a bent line
or crushed brick.
Perfection at it’s best.
They encase us within a room,
trapping us within.
Counting each brick at least kills time.
Hell, it’s better than listening to the teacher.
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Copyright 2005 finaldestiny
Published on Friday, June 3, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, August 13, 2007, What Limes
(54) wrote:
damn. Skepticism didn't pay off on that one! Great stuff from something so medial!
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A former member wrote:
hehe so true, so true. very nice.
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On Friday, June 3, 2005, Liz
(265) wrote:
"THEY encase us"? Otherwise, very clever.