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Maybe Were better off this way
By thinevoicetragic
so far.. Off the wrong path.
So firmly compressed in the darkness.
and yet still being optimistic.
So i'll somehow survive this.
Why is it. so hard. to find serenity.
In This Empty valley.
Looking. in the wrong direction.
Keep walking. off the wrong path.
so far away.
i'll never end up on the right track.
And someday i'll walk away,
With my head held high.
and be able to say goodbye to you.
Maybe were better of this way.
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Copyright 2005 thinevoicetragic
Published on Friday, May 20, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Maybe Were better off this way"
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A former member wrote:
Heh second stanza kicked me in the teeth. I know exactly how this goes. Very sweet. ~Ship!
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On Saturday, May 21, 2005, Leigh
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wrote:
This IS painful, but seems to come from the heart, thank you.
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On Friday, May 20, 2005, Northstar
(374) wrote:
i can so relate to this piece right now--well done
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On Friday, May 20, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
this is awesome!!! yay! ^_^ keep the good ones flowing hun
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On Friday, May 20, 2005, Grim_Sorrow
(74) wrote:
Good Write... Impressive... Keep it Up
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A former member wrote:
hhmmmm stand strong. I like this work, nice job
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