Perfect To Me

By Labitina

I want you I need you, cold blood and all
I want your violence, I want your pain great and small
I want your lust I need your love
I've felt your touch it's all I can think of
I'll be your dark queen if you'll be my broken king
Then my love for you will stop at nothing
With your flaws I find you perfect
And somehow your hate adds to the effect
You are perfectly cold, dark and disturbed
The thoughts I find beautiful would make most perturbed
Your words are so intriguing, they carry so much meaning
And your soft gentle touch gives me this amazing feeling
You go with everything in "One for Me"
I think your the one I want to find "the Key"
I want to feel the chill of your icy heart
For it's the cause of your poetry that I call art
I want to feel the warmth of your body
With your skin against mine caressing me gently
I want your lips to softly brush my skin
Only with you will I truly enjoy this sin
I want to please you so just tell me how
Come with me cause I want you now






~No matter who else we both find my
thoughts remain the same about you~

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Copyright 2005 Labitina
Published on Wednesday, May 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • LovelyAssassinx On Saturday, May 28, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    This is wonderful. I love this write. Great Job. ~Unlucky

  • Serenity On Saturday, May 21, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    ::Shivers:: Oh I like. This is too perfect.

  • Yesterday On Saturday, May 21, 2005, Yesterday (12)By person wrote:

    I love this. It's really amazing. Nice write.

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, May 19, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    With your flaws I find you perfect... what a beautiful line that is. Great write ~*~TarT~*~

  • A former member wrote: Wow...amazing, beautiful...what more can i say. Great write...keep up the good work. Peace ~Kloe~

  • elisa On Wednesday, May 18, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    '...I'll be your dark queen if you'll be my broken king...'.......that line just feels so right~elisa

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