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Day of emotions
By icyhott
have you ever had someone say they loved you
then betray you in the worst way?
no i dont mean to cheat
but something so much worse
the one person i came so close to loving
more than anything in the world
took all i had left
in my being
all that is
precious and dear to me
and crushed it with a single
careless and swift movement
she left me here
stranded forever
in oblivion
yet still she says
she loVes me
HAH!
she doent even know what love is
love...
something i havnt been capable of for a while
no, no i shouldnt say that because i do love
one and only one
and when she died...
she took every bit of love
in my entire being
with her
so there it will lie
six feet under
in a cramped ivory box
with satin lining
next to my love
my forever beloved
Rachel
Rest in piece my decadent angel
RACHEL (1985-2001)
i love you now and forever
and nobody can EVER take that away!
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Copyright 2005 icyhott
Comments on "Day of emotions"
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A former member wrote:
One of the worst pains anyone can feel. Very sorry. I understand,, I love you wrote about her.. She must have been amazing
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(309)
wrote:
im so sorry you lost her..i've gone through pain like this, im sorry you had to go through it..im here if you need to talk to somebody..i say it to everyone..great write..such sadness.. -Kel
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A former member wrote:
theres so much emotion in this. im sorry you lost her. great write though.
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Awww, sorry for your loss. Wonderful write ~*~Tart~*~
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