Something you can't do
By murder_in_clubland
So many tears I have cried
wondering where you were late at night
a forgotten lover,just passing you by?
You walk through the door with a smile on your face
How can you be so happy?
"Sorry I was late"
Pulling out flowers and icecream...
And there was kissing
Late nights as the candles glowed
flickering in the midst of all the heat
You just held me as our bodies entwined
interlacing...again and again
Where did that go?
did we leave it behind when we left that place?
And where did that go?
We left it behind without a trace
I wish we could have that back,
Grasp those moments one last time
and tell me that you love me,
weve lost that passion that a girl like me needs
A girl like me...NEEDS.
My heart breaks
as you pull my hair
and call me a whore
But I don't know what to do
besides giving you pleasure
I dont know how to say I need you,
How desperatly I need you...
I'm telling you now I need you
I need you to hold me and stroke me hair
kiss my forhead and tell me its going to be alright
I need your support so desperatly
and lovemaking.I need you to love me,over and over
And I dont know what to do
Ive lost all hope in my heart
You kissed me but its just not the same
not the same as when you loved me,really loved up
when you opened up your shoulder
So i had something to lean on when I needed you most
But nothings the same...
I brought myself to tears
couldnt imagine being so empty without you
but theres something that i need
that you just cant do.
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Comments on "Something you can't do"
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A former member wrote:
love the consistancy in flow and unchanging theme. ][ ][
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On Monday, May 16, 2011, ComeLittleLeaves
(9) wrote:
Absolutely amazing and heart wrenching at the same time....I love how it all flows together ever so gently. Lovely read :)
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A former member wrote:
Ummm.. Amazing. You broke my hearts with those words. Beautiful. Soul wrenching. I want to read this over and over again. You are an inspiration. Thank you so much for sharing this :)
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On Thursday, May 12, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
This is sweet and so sad. Needing someone so much is definately hard to do. Great write. -Cinn
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A former member wrote:
i can relate to this alot. i love the way you use words. great write.
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On Thursday, May 12, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
beautiful...i can definatly relate to this piece..very well...KEEP IT UP hun! fabulous
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On Thursday, May 12, 2005, Chimauron
(87) wrote:
.... this all came pouring out like a flood when you wrote it, didn't it? These are the best poems. Raw emotion, no fancy play on words. Just feeling. And lts of it. Nicely done!
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On Thursday, May 12, 2005, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
lol yeah your totally right.. thanks/=) ~xXx