I think God is...

By Poisoned Perfection

I think God is a conjuring trick
Fed to you when your three
They say
Pray to Him
Commit a sin
And hell is where you'll be

I think God is idle
Once you discover
Your prayers were in vain
Because
Your lifes still shit
And your still cold
You should sell your soul
to me

Believe in something you can't see
Become something you'll never be
Your sign now reads
"Tell me who I am"
But no ones listening

So listen
Little boys and girls
Save yourselves while you can
Real and Fantasy
God or Man

YOU decide what to believe in

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Copyright 2005 Poisoned Perfection
Published on Saturday, April 30, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Regardless of any recent doubts or recants on your part that youmight have had since writing this I still love this piece.

  • A former member wrote: It was raw expression and the very last line says it all.....I'm a preacher's kid.....I don't belive in god but i don't believe in satan either. I hope the inner struggle does not torture you for too long ~Much Respect~

  • A former member wrote: I think my god's a redhead... on Fridays.

  • Serenity On Monday, June 13, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    XD I loved Elisa's comment. Anyways this was great!

  • happilydepressed On Monday, June 13, 2005, happilydepressed (409)By person wrote:

    loved it

  • Poisoned Perfection On Monday, June 13, 2005, Poisoned Perfection (3)By person wrote:

    when i wrote this, God was the last thing I had to hold onto and that was taken from me..some ppl might not understand that but it was someone really close to me that made me feel like i couldn't have anything to do with God if they did.. to be honest im

  • Poisoned Perfection On Monday, June 13, 2005, Poisoned Perfection (3)By person wrote:

    still confused

  • happilydepressed On Monday, June 13, 2005, happilydepressed (409)By person wrote:

    if you want to hear my opinion read my poem Feedback

  • A former member wrote: even though im a christian i love this poem... no person should be pressured into what they believe. a beautiful piece keep up the good work :) xxx

  • elisa On Sunday, May 1, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    there is no difference between God and i.......i just have a secretary answering my prayers;) elisa

  • Six-Out On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Telling someone that they are wrong, then telling them to decide is blatant hypocrisy. Try to be unbiased, then say decide for yourself.

  • A former member wrote: i found it really interesting...i like how you are willing to put out your opinion...

  • A former member wrote: this is fucking beautiful

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