Dying in darkness
By Sparximus3
At times I feel as if I've lost my way
I really don't know what to say
In, a way, I'm not sure how to feel
Except when I get the urge to kill
There is at least one person in my life
Who has more than once stopped the blade of my knife
She is here beside me on this day
But my pain will not go away
If I were to really try,
If I were to really die
Who would miss me?
My friends, my family? Would they cry?
Please Amanda, Do me a favor.
Do not cry.
As I spin the barrel
And say goodbye.
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Copyright 2005 Sparximus3
Published on Friday, April 29, 2005.
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A former member wrote:
So sad, yet so sweet somehow at the same time. Wonderful poem!
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On Monday, June 27, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
This is creepy, I hope you never go through with the feelings. Your family and friends would surely miss you, it would hurt them more than you could imagine..you can never take that back. So expressive, yet well written.. creepy
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A former member wrote:
This is really a beautiful poem. I can relate because I have given serious thought of ending my own life. This poem is just awesome
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On Friday, May 13, 2005, Sparximus3
(8) wrote:
need more comments
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A former member wrote:
that is beautiful...many times what has stopped me is the sorrow that my family might feel. i couldn't make them go through that
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A former member wrote:
wow i really feel the emotion probably b/cuz i feel lyk that sometimes and yes i know i have problems and i probably need help. but awesome wright
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On Friday, April 29, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
hmm..yeah i dun see the connection with Columbine either...but it was a great write! the ending was perfect and you wove your words together so beautifully..bloody brilliant
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On Friday, April 29, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
i dont see how that would start another Columbine..but ok. good write..lots of emotion, feeling..and im sure plenty of people would care...stunning write! -Kel