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One thing missing
By Sparximus3
The stress, the anger, the hate
It cannot be forgotten
Deep down inside,
A love that went rotten
You cheated on me with
Not one, but two
I still can't comprehend
How I ever loved you
You sit there on your knees,
Begging, crying and pleading
You don't think about me
And how much my heart is bleeding
Maybe again someday
We can be with one another
But only after you prove yourself to me
And tell what you did to your mother
You know as well as I do
That your heart is not as pure as that of a dove
I always felt there was one thing missing,
A thing called love.
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Copyright 2005 Sparximus3
Published on Friday, April 29, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "One thing missing"
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On Monday, June 27, 2005, stormtalk
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wrote:
For the most part, your rhymes don't sound forced. I particularly liked the cleverness of the second stanza; however, the third and fifth come across as a little over the top. Keep it up, Sparx.
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On Monday, June 27, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
Full of pain and anger, well written. I understand this feeling all too well. How could you really truely love me, yet treat me this way?
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A former member wrote:
This is a wicked poem. i can feel the anger and the betrayl that you are protraying in this poem. Great job!
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On Friday, May 13, 2005, Sparximus3
(8) wrote:
need more comments
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
kewl poem i like it alot
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A former member wrote:
again...beautiful. i like how you can change your genres and still make them shine.
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On Friday, April 29, 2005, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
all that makes you hurt makes you all the more stronger
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On Friday, April 29, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
harsh, but deservedly so..great job! im glad your stronger than those who hurt you, its a great quality thinger 2 have! 'nother great job! -Kel
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On Friday, April 29, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
i can relate to the first half of this..nice job on this..Keep it up
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