Rain

By tormentedsoul666

My body is a temple,
My mind is a maze.
All I want now,
Is to be free of their gaze.
I want to be alone,
Quiet once more.
But all they want,
Is to use me as a whore.
They call me an insolent child,
Useless and weak.
I try hadr to keep them in,
But these tears seem to leak.
I sit in my room,
The blade to my wrist.
I want to end it all,
Cause right now I am pissed.
It would be so easy,
Just cut across the vein.
I have to have some relief,
So I go out in the rain.
I like the rain,
It covers my blood and tears.
The rain is froever my friend,
And this will happen for years.



don't really like this one as much as my others but hey, its here so i'm putting it up.

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Copyright 2005 tormentedsoul666
Published on Wednesday, April 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Kinkypoptart On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    I like it. Describes a lot of feelings i've had in the past few weeks. Good write ~*~TarT~*~

  • tormentedsoul666 On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thanks much

  • tormentedsoul666 On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (74)By person wrote:

    thanks i was...i dunno...when i wrote this. ~ts666

  • Dark_Goddess On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Dark_Goddess (13)By person wrote:

    I like this one. I feel the words in my own life.

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