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Selfless Suicide or Freedom in Death
By tormentedsoul666
Maybe they're right,
Maybe they're wrong.
I can't tell now,
I waited too long.
They tell me my life,
It's all in vain.
But its not my fault,
YOU caused me this pain.
I can't live,
But I can't seem to die.
Keeping it all in,
Lie after lie.
I'm fine, trust me,
They don't know it's not true.
I'm only this way,
Cause I don't know what to do.
I try it again,
But my body won't give.
Why oh why,
Is it so hard to live?
People always tell me,
I know how you feel.
But they don't even know me,
Let alone what is real.
I hate this feeling,
Deep within my chest.
No matter what I do,
It won't seem to rest.
Arm warmers and fishnet,
Cover these scars.
Thugh no one else can see them,
I know exactly where they are.
A slice on my stomach,
A few on my arm.
I know they don't mean it,
But they all cause me harm.
Thats why I must end it,
Get rid of my life.
So I wrote this note,
With the blood from my knife....
Goodbye now I'm leaving,
Don't cry because of me.
Be happy that I'm gone,
Cause now you are free.
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Copyright 2005 tormentedsoul666
Comments on "Selfless Suicide or Freedom in Death"
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A former member wrote:
Suicide it's a suicide! Me likey too! :P
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Dark_Goddess
(13)
wrote:
Nicely done, I like it!
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thank you so much!
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Seems a bit of a cliche now, despite this you seem to have at least provided your own impetus...You have the signs of a good writer, progress well...
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
i wrote it on pure impulse, sitting in my room really sad again for no reason at all, but thanks everyone keeps telling me that, i'm glad someone actually believes in me
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
thank you so much!! i love to put pain in my poetry
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On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
painfully written, but well done nonetheless. i especially like this line "So I wrote this note, With the blood from my knife...."
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On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
sad poem but it flows nicely.
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